The Girl On The Wall
This post is an entry into the Scholar and Scribe "Romance" edition invitational. If you'd like to join the fun, you can find the post HERE
Image by Heiko from Pixabay - the two original (now restored) snake goddesses found in Knossos by Arthur Evans
Phaistos, 2009
"Mister Mike, come see ! We've found a thing !"
Mike looked up from his notes at the local worker. "Me ? Where's Professor Jackson ?"
"Day off, Mister Mike."
He stood and followed the man to the dig site a hundred yards away. A small cluster of local archaeology students stood around waiting for Mike. He was no older than them, but they looked up to him as Professor Jackson's assistant. When he'd graduated from Oxford with honours the previous year, his tutors had said he was the most promising archaeology student they'd taught in many years.
As soon as they saw him, the lead student started talking at him in an excited tone. "We were digging in the lowest level of the West Court right at the Middle Minoan 1B boundary and a plastered wall fell away. You've got to see what it revealed ! Come, quick !"
Mike followed, and then he saw why they were so excited. His jaw dropped.
There, perfectly preserved by the overlaid plaster, was an early Minoan fresco. But not just any fresco. The image of a snake goddess, from before they were thought to have existed. She had the classic multi-layered flounced skirt, a coiled snake in each hand, and open bodice revealing her perfect bosom. What was amazing was how lifelike she was compared to the stylised renderings of later periods. She was young, and she was utterly beautiful ! She looked as if she was in her early twenties, with pale skin and hair curled and oiled into tight ringlets.
"Wow," was his first reaction. "She's incredible, so realistic. She must have been drawn from life, a real person. Her expression is so beautiful and kind. I wonder who she was, what her story was, her name."
That might, Mike dreamed of her, awaking with regret that he was fantasising about a girl who had been dust for nearly four millennia.
So he carried on his studies, but couldn't quite get her out of his mind or his dreams.
Athens 2012
Mike sat outside the coffee shop in Athens, sipping an espresso and reading the latest journal. He glanced up, and his heart stopped. There was a young waitress inside, just walking behind the bar, and she had her face. That incredible, beautiful, kind face. A mirror image of the girl in the fresco.
It wasn't possible of course, and Mike tried to calm himself down. He'd wait until she came to the row of tables outside to take someone's order, and see if he could speak to her.
After fifteen minutes, there was no sign of her. Perhaps she only served the indoor tables. He picked up his empty cup and took it in, but there was no sign of her.
Putting his cup on the bar, he asked "I saw a waitress in here a few minutes ago..."
"Sorry, she just clocked off and went home. She's on holiday for a month now, going to one of the islands."
"Could you give me her address or telephone number ?"
"No, we can't do that. But write a message on this napkin and we'll pass it to her when she's back from holiday."
Paris 2019
Mike had never heard back from the cafe. He understood; their staff probably got propositioned all the time, and they'd want to protect a young beautiful waitress from unwanted attention.
So now he was in Paris to attend a symposium on Late Helladic earthenware pottery. He was due to give a talk on cross-cultural transmission in the Aegean.
He walked past a gallery in a side street just off the Boulevard Beaumarchais, the Yvon Lambert Galerie, according to the sign on the wall. There, he saw a painting. The same face !
Hurrying inside, he asked if it was for sale, and if he could be put in touch with the artist.
He emerged with the carefully wrapped painting a few minutes later, a phone number, and a wallet that was lighter by a couple of thousand Euros.
As soon as he returned to his hotel room, he called the artist's number. The phone was answered after a couple of rings.
"Bonjour, c'est Pierre."
"Hello Pierre, you don't know me, but my name is Mike Chadwick. I bought one of your paintings today, the one you called 'Greek Girl'. It's beautiful. I just wondered if you could tell me who the girl is ?"
The artist's voice came though the phone's speaker, in perfect English but with a heavy French accent.
"Ah, she is indeed beautiful. I bumped into her in a cafe, she sat for me very willingly that day but I had to work fast, she said she was only in Paris for a short while. But she never gave me her name or a telephone number. I'm so sorry."
Mike thanked the artist and ended the call. It felt like she was teasing him, that he was chasing a phantasm. But he had to put it out of his mind (even though he dreamed of her that night), the symposium was the next day.
He arrived at the symposium early, and spent the day listening to lectures, meeting up with long-time colleagues, and generally milling around. The lecture he was due to give was scheduled for late afternoon, so he had all day to kill.
Finally the time came. His lecture went well; it was one he'd delivered before, and the room was full. Some of the audience were a bit boisterous; a group of American students who looked muscled-up and more likely to be at home playing American Football than in a lecture. But it was all good natured.
At the end, after the inevitable Q&A session wrapped up and as Mike was slipping his notes back into their binder, he looked up and saw the American students filing out.
And there she was ! She was in the row behind where they'd been sitting, and had been entirely hidden by their bulky presence.
Stunned, Mike could only stare. Then he caught himself. That was so rude of him. The girl gave him a kind of half-smile, and it felt like the room lit up. He was so embarrassed he found himself looking down at his notes. Momentarily. And in that time, she was gone.
This time, he was determined not to lose her. The room was virtually empty, so he walked, almost sprinted, to the exit. He wanted to catch up with her, talk to her so badly.
The double door led to an ante-room beyond; these places are always laid out like that, it's where everyone gets their coffee fix from tables laid out with long rows of identical white too-small cups before going into the lecture room.
As he rushed through, he felt a hand lay on his arm, and stopped. He looked, and it was her ! But this time, she had a wide smile on that perfect face.
"Have you been looking for me ?"
Her voice was musical, multi-tonal and rich, with just a hint of an exotic tone to it.
Mike tried not to get flustered, but couldn't help it. This was the face he'd dreamed about so often for all these years, and the slender but perfectly proportioned body he'd seen on that plaster wall a decade ago. This close, he picked up a slight musky warm scent, which he'd swear was natural not some shop-bought perfume.
"You... " he began, "You're the girl in Pierre's painting..."
"Yes," she nodded. "And the waitress from Athens. And the mural in Phaistos."
It sounded insane, but she said it in such a matter of fact way.
"How is that possible ?" he asked, feeling unable to form a more coherent sentence.
Her smile widened. "You said it yourself; I'm a snake goddess. Can you imagine nearly four thousand years of having no choice but loneliness or submitting to brutes who only want to use me for something ? When I saw you looking at me on the wall, and asking who I was rather than what I was worth or what I could do for you, I knew you were the right one. Every time I looked in on you, I could see I was still in your dreams. We are meant to be together. Forever. After all, I am a goddess. It's what I do."
Mike didn't know how he knew, but he realised that every word was true, and he accepted it.
"I think I've been in love with you from the moment I saw you. But I don't even know your name."
She laughed, a sound like liquid silver. "Why, of course you know it. I am Ariadne."
I love how the writing has this vivid, cinematic quality to it. I could picture every scene so clearly, from Mike stumbling upon the fresco at the dig site to that magical moment when he finally meets Ariadne face-to-face. And the way their connection just seems to transcend time and space is so romantic and intriguing.
I'm dying to know what happens next! Does Mike and Ariadne's love story continue? Does she reveal more about her true nature as a goddess? I need answers, lol. Great work, can't wait to read more.
Thank you - I'm so glad you like it !
I haven't thought through what happens next at all, lol. But I did think hard about Ariadne, and had to create twist on her legend that isn't in any of the myths.
Plus I had to scrap an entire thread running through the story when I discovered that Cretan hieroglyphs are now thought to be an ideographic-syllabic script (as a precursor to Linear A) rather than an ideographic-consonantal one like Egyptian hieroglyphs. Yeah, it's sad how much research I put into some of my posts 😆
The vivid imagery in this story made me feel like I was right there with Mike. The mystery and romance are so interesting. Hope to get the next one brother
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I really liked this story where you mix mythology with love. Very well narrated, so much so that it makes readers delve into the plot. Very good work.
Thanks for sharing your story.
Good day.
Thank you ! Can you tell I'm a bit of a fan of pre-classical Greek mythology 😀
I had to take some liberties with it, though, but I think I did it kindly (at least, I hope I did !)
It was a very enjoyable and entertaining read, the goddess thing gave it a mystical touch.
Excellent night.
Wowzer! I love how you wove so much of the main character's soul into your descriptions- I think we can learn a lot from the way he speaks to those who look up to him humbly, sips expresso while patiently observing a woman he desires greatly, and waits when many would take hasty action...
The lines near the end spoke to me too. To be loved for who you are and not what you are is stunning. To have someone that just wants YOU is such a great gift from the universe. A true romance story indeed 💗
If you don't get first place with this one, I'd be shocked. An eloquent tale with this sort of vibrance is a rare read 🤩
Thank you - I'm so glad you liked it ! I tried really hard to think myself into the heads of the two main characters before starting to write.
Although I wrote it mainly from Mike's perspective, I always had it in the back of my mind that in reality, it was Ariadne who was controlling events, touching his life just enough to keep his obsession alive, and watching him to see if he really was the one. Not that I see her as a creepy stalker or anything - just someone who has been hurt a lot in the past and wanted to be sure it was right.
The hard bit was keeping it down to the word count, I could have made a whole novella out of it !
Your comment on the contest post sounded as if you were unsure if this is romance, but the expression of Mike's feelings and passion in this piece make it clear!
Well done, will their romance blossom? Or is their love doomed as is so often the case with gods and mortals? I hope we get to find out!
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Thank you ! I must admit I was unsure, because romance is a genre I've never written before.
Most of what I write seems to be of the "dark and terrifying, then everyone dies" variety, so I focused on trying to think about the emotions of the characters and giving them a happy ending at the end of the story. I think if I write a sequel, I should try to make it end happily for them, just to make a change from my normal style 😁
Well romances don't always end happily! But I look forward to reading it if you do decide to continue their story.
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