Worldbuilding Prompt #796 - A Tidal Wave To End A World
This post was inspired by a writing prompt in the Worldbuilding Community - Worldbuilding Prompt #796 - Tidal Wave
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Comms-Lieutenant Kaver stifled a yawn. He'd been on duty for four hours, and nothing had happened. It rarely did. The fleet was inactive for the time being, sitting in reserve near the R&R planet of Blackjack-5, the ships' crews being rotated down in sequence for some much deserved leave.
Then the incoming message screen lit up. The frame suddenly flashed orange, indicating a priority distress message. Kaver hit the button, and a pre-recorded repeat message started coming through.
"This is the Aquatica IV Colony calling. Repeat; Aquatica IV. We are declaring a situation red emergency. A large asteroid has been detected on a collision course, it came from behind our sun too close and too large to attempt deflection. Please help !"
Kaver shot into full wakefulness, hitting the button that would send an emergency page to Captain Razlin. Then he clicked the respond button on the comms deck.
"Aquatica IV, this is Imperial Fleet 7233A-7 responding. We are currently in orbit around Blackjack-6. Please give us more information on your situation."
The repeating message stopped in mid-phrase, and a man's voice came over the communicator.
"Thank the gods ! Please help us, it's going to hit in less than 50 hours. It's over 40 kilometres in diameter, and is going to make a tidal wave two thousand metres or more high."
The man's voice was shaking, panicky. Kaver asked, "Are you able to evacuate to high ground deep inland ? Mountan tops ? What can we do to help ?"
The voice came back a few seconds later. "We're a water world, there is no land. None. Nothing to break the tsunami, it'll go around the world over and over for days. Our floating cities aren't designed for this, they'll be smashed to pieces. We need total evacuation, all two million of us."
At that point, Captain Razlin strolled onto the ship's bridge, still carrying a half-empty bottle of beer.
"S'up Kaver ? This better be good, we were just getting into the party spirit."
"Yes Sir !" Kaver said, "We've got a code red from Aquatica IV. Massive asteroid impact in 50 hours, a complete planet-killer, tidal waves on a water world that'll wipe them out. They're asking for total evacuation of two million people."
Razlin appeared to sober up instantly.
"Tell them we're on the way, Kaver. Then message the fleet. I want every ship moving within the hour. Tell the people planetside on Blackjack-5 their leave just got indefinitely extended. Oh, and not to gamble all their money away before we get back."
The king of Prompts is here again 🥰. Wow, that story is intense bro. It's scary to think about a situation like that. I hope they can evacuate everyone in time and find a solution to save their world.
Thank you ! Yep, I do like cataclysmic stories. Maybe I'll write a "part 2" at some point to see what happens....
Would love to read a part two definitely 🥰🥰🥰
Here's part 2... I hope you enjoy it !
https://peakd.com/hive-191038/@alonicus/worldbuilding-prompt-794-the-asteroids-secret
For reference, the background to this is that the Empire and it's allies have been at war with the Einheriar (an AI machine civilisation) for thousands of years. There are a few people who've been following my sci-fi setting, but hopefully it's not too obscure without the full background info !
There might be a third part 😉
Really, keep it coming bro🥰
Dang, tight deadline! 50 hours to evac 2 million people, I hope it goes smoothly! (But, knowing how events usually go in your worlds, I suspect a partial success to be the best they get! lol)
lol, you know me too well 😁 That or I'm getting predictable....
Assuming the fleet is operating Type 17 Battle Cruisers (the standard Imperial type), they've got 200 ships which could lift maybe 400,000 people. That would be standing room only, and leaving everything behind.
So if they can get the whole Legion (5 Fleets) there in time, they might just do it. The whole Battle Corps (5 Legions) could do the job easily.
But that doesn't allow for.... complications.... like, ohhh, I don't know, maybe an Einheriar fleet hiding in stealth mode behind the incoming asteroid, pushing it along on tractor beams....
I thought it was a little too convenient that an asteroid passed close enough to their sun to avoid detection but not so close as to be dragged into its gravity well and burned up. Those Einheriar are crafty lil devils.