Zapfic50 Monday - The Last Bus Out
This post is my entry to the ZapficMonday writing contest for this week - the prompt is BUS.
Enjoy !
Image by Sujin Paluga from Pixabay - I had to use a stock image, the image I really wanted to use is thoroughly copyright protected, and is a real incident from a couple of years ago.
Drones flew overhead, artillery crashed down nearby. Every treeline concealed a sniper.
They reached the final checkpoint.
Safety. Well, relative safety in this war zone.
One thing had got them through. The bus had a single word painted in letters three feet high on the sides and roof.
“Дети” – children.
For any of my friends (or anyone else, for that matter !) who reads this and fancies giving it a try, it's really fun and thought provoking. The rules are really simple;
- The Freewriters Community has a Zapfic post with a writing prompt every Monday
- Your response must be posted within 3 days in the Freewriters Community.
- Please post a link to your entry in the comments section of the prompt post
- Please use #freewritehouse and #zapfic tags.
- The important one - YOU MUST use a word/character counter (if you search for word counter on the internet or in your phone's app store you will get a big choice!) wordcounter.net and include a screenshot. Entries without a screenshot will NOT be valid.
- Please use the prompt provided as you see fit (use your imagination)
- Try to tell a complete story if you can!
- The story should be EXACTLY 50 words long.
Wow, that gave me chills. Just imagining that word Дети as the only shield in a war zone is heartbreaking. Sometimes, reality is more terrifying than fiction. Powerful writing in just 50 words man
I !luv this short story and how you made use of the prompt.
Nicely written dear
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Thank you !
!BBH
You are welcome
Ohh wow! The bus can be likened to the Trojan horse yes?
Thank you ! More like an escape route - so far, I think both sides have been respecting buses carrying children away from the front lines.
!BBH
Yeah, children always come first because they are the future.