RE: A Murmuring of Starlings
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I literally experienced this story in my mind's eye.
Felt the emotions from the tired and stressed out mom, the lonely man fighting so hard to not be depressed and of course the children who seem to be a handful and oh!
How can I forget the mouth watery cookies?? and how perfectly described each bite was to my taste bud..
Oh I'm salivating just picturing and tasting it 🤤.
In all, it was such a lovely read ❤️🌹
Well done Sam 🤝🏾
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aw, thank you so much, @bipolar95 I like to write in such a way that I can place my readers in situ alongside my main character so that they experience the emotions of my characters in real-time. I do my best to bring these feelings to life in my stories, focusing as much as possible on show, don't tell to deliver this objective. Thank you for taking the time to read my story. I appreciate you 💗💗
You do a good job and you are welcome 🤗