Looking for people
I walk down the street but no one is there. At least not with their minds. Everybody is busy somehow.
See that woman over there pushing the baby stroller? Notice the cellphone in her hand supported by the handle of the stroller. Even though she is just 2 feet away from her baby she is miles and miles away from it. Where is she? I have no idea. All I know is: She is not really here.
On the other side of the road is a man jogging with giant headphones blasting loud music in his ears. He is not really here. Probably he is at a concert. Or in a lecture hall.
In the opposite direction a young couple is walking. They walk side by side but they are not really here. He seems to be at the movies while she is in a discussion with someone else.
After a while of passing those who are not really here I finally meet my friend Harvey. He does not care for new technologies, he is too old for that. I am glad to have him.
No one ever notices him but I am not surprised. How could they? After all, they don't recognize me either, they are not really here.
We decide to go shopping. In the subway station we find that the taking of Pelham 123 is the fastest way to get there, even though it makes the most stops on its way.
No one in the subway car is talking. They all are not really here. Just looking down to the ground. As I mention this to Harvey they do not react.
In the mall there are not even clerks anymore. One shop is closed, someone put chewing gum on or into the lock. Just a hand written sign tells us it is closed because of reasons.
We can still find no people. They are not here. Monitors on the shopping cards keep them far away. Telling them what they should want, rewarding them for scanning their goods themselves. Collecting points as if it were a game.
It seems we are not the only ones looking for people. A sign for a missing person hangs on the Wall. They are searching for Paul Blart. Mall Cop wanted is put right next to it. No wonder they cannot find him if there is no one here to look for him. And with no one else here to see the job add, they will not get him anytime soon.
We got what we came for and decide to take a cab for our way home. The first car that stops looks like a New York Taxi. As suspected there is no driver. I unlock the door by scanning the QR code with my cellphone. The option "Coming Home" appears on the screen and I click it. Before Harvey can enter, the cab drives away.
The legacy divider screen to the front seat has the support hotline written on it. I dial the number to complain. A computer voice guides me through a dialog in which I press numbers to proceed through the options. They line breaks down. I want to redial when I receive a text message. The company expresses their regret for my unhappiness with the service. As a compensation my next ride is free.
Before I can feel or express any anger I hear a beeping tone and the door unlocks. I am home. The beeping gets louder the longer I stay in the car so I leave.
We have no doorman (or woman) anymore. They upgraded all the buildings in the street to a camera systems. One guy (or gal? I am not really sure) somewhere in the world is looking over the cameras of all the buildings now. S/he is not really here.
In front of my apartment I enter my password: Swordfish. Harvey is waiting for me. While I want to ask him how he was faster than me, he is already asking for Bob. Suddenly the doorbell rings. Will we find people after all even though we stopped looking? When I open the door no one is really here. Just a package lying on the ground and a little delivery robot heading for the goods elevator. The robot belongs to the house but surely someone must have given it the package?
After closing the door I head straight through to the rear window and grab my binoculars on the way. Maybe I can find someone there. The only thing I can make out is a drone. It looks empty, no more cargo. I think it is already back on its way to the terminal.
I turn around and Harvey is asking me to guess who is coming to dinner. But what about Bob? Was he not asking about him a few seconds ago? That seems to be the right answer.
At last I will meet people. The daring task will be completed. Somehow that makes me fell like I am legend.
This little short story is totally fictional. I do not live in the city nor do I live alone (thankfully) and (sadly) I do not have a friend named Harvey.
I put more than one theme to it. The looking for people theme was intentional and the main idea for this story. And yes, it is borrowed from Diogenes of Sinope. His old teachings just seemed so fitting to our modern times.
During writing the movie theme somehow emerged by itself when Harvey showed up out of the blue. Well, not out of the blue. People were physically there but not mentally. And those people were everyone else. My mind brought me to Harvey as the opposite, a single being that's physically invisible, so no one could see him except the protagonist. From there the movie(s) theme picked up when we went into the subway station. I could not resist that one either so at that point I decided to just let it ride as it developed in my head.
Thank you very much for reading, I hope you feel it was worth your time.
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I must admit i was hooked, feels like the not-too-distant future! Let's hope some people remain! Are we even really here?
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Yes, I hope so, too. Dystopia can be interesting to write about. Sadly I feel it's already here but maybe we can turn things around.
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I enjoyed reading this story. It sounds funny but true.
Technology has taken us to a different place when we are somewhere else.
Lovely write.
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I really appreciate your story @hannes-stoffel! Technology is not all the same. It can be disconnecting and enslaving or liberating and empowering. This is an are of deep interest for me, teaching people the difference, and how to use the technology that we have well! Thanks again for sharing! 😁 🙏 💚 ✨ 🤙
Thank you very much for your thoughts. What I wanted to say with this story has clearly resonated with you.
I agree, technology can be a blessing if we use it wisely. But it can be a curse dividing society and humanity.
Let's hope the future brings us the good version.
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You're very welcome! Yes, that's true, it has! I see agendas working toward the dark and controlled transhumanist future, but I don't believe that it will succeed now. There are too many people waking up too quickly, which is a beautiful thing! Thank you again! 😁 🙏 💚 ✨ 🤙
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This is an excellent way of saying technology now rule humanity.
Thank you.
It could still get worse, many dystopian ideas are out there.
Maybe it will take a turn for the better though (Still hope in me).
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Still hope. Thanks for sharing.
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Great story. Even though fictitious, it seems real and believable. Perhaps on a horizon fast approaching.
Thanks.
Indeed very fast but I fear not on the distant horizon anymore.
We'll see where it goes.
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A little bit of fiction maybe, and non fiction at the same time. I was complete hooked. The truth remaining that these things are bound to happen, sooner or later. The search for actual people cause we'd all soon be surrounded by robots and everything.
It was a really refreshing read. Thanks.✨
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Thank you very much.
Yes, fictional but possible. Scary, eh?
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Seriously I thought this was real until it get to the part where you said little short story
Nice write up buddy
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Thank you for the compliment. No, it was a pure "what if" train of thought.
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Your sense of creativity is astonishing, I applaud the coherence between the lines, it was worth my time.
Thanks for sharing.
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The fictional story was very impressive and I like it very much. It's true that it's a fictional story but I think it can be the future of the future world because there are huge possibilities of it. I think we are still lucky not having such kind of world.
Thank you.
In some cities they're already testing those delivery drones/robots and self driving cars.
We already got those shopping carts and self checkout cellphone apps (latter even in the store I work) so not that far off.
Hopefully it will turn around at some point. As long as we don't lose the human contact I think technology can be a blessing but it's the moment we dive into it and lose touch with our surroundings when it gets dangerous.
Thank you very much 😊
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