Words have Power (A dreem-wotw drabble)

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This drabble is in response to the latest Dreem-WOTW challenge due today in Dreemport by midnight UTC. You can find the contest post, and how to enter, here. The gist is to write a micro-fiction exactly 100 words long in response to one of the prompts. I used the prompt: Where does it hurt?

The high-pitched cacophony reached a crescendo, drawing my attention. Looking up, I saw Lily slump to her knees as the other children scattered.

The space between us disappeared in seconds. Kneeling down, I wrapped myself around her pain.

Where does it hurt, angel?

Her bottom lip quivered. A salty wound ripped open as tremors rippled through her little body.

I winced.

Her silent tears gripped my heart.

I followed her gaze to where the children stood... laughing, staring, pointing.

I turned her face gently toward me.

Where, baby?

She took my hand in hers and placed it on her heart.

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Hi @samsmith1971,
Thank you for participating in the #teamuk curated tag. We have upvoted your quality content.
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Nice, I see you have a writer in you somewhere there. Keep honing it. Good Luck!!!

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Thank you for your kind and encouraging comment, @weone 🤗 I can't actually compete as I run the contest hehe. But I like to find new writing challenges and always appreciate constructive criticism so that I can grow in my writing. I usually write circa 1500-2000 word fiction posts. I've only written a couple of drabbles prior to this one but thought it might be fun for the dreem-wotw crowd this month !LUV !ALIVE

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Oh, gracious Lord. Her heart. That fragile thing hurts? Life is unfair. It truly is.

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Awwww, silent tears mirror deep, sad emotions and I am carried away with your drabble Sam. Excellent writing as always.

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Ouch and I didn't expect the pain in the 💙

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I didn't expect that ending. This was emotional one and I loved it.

#dremport

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Wow. This is awesome Sam. You should borrow me your mind sometime...

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