RE: The Colony on Meranda IV - Part 6

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Damn that Garnes!
Lobotomy and chip implants as a sentence is quite grimdark! And terrifying!

Great addition to this plot! Can't wait to see what happens next!

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Thank you ! I was doing Grimdark in this setting looong before GW copyrighted the idea. I mean, I didn't call it that back then, but it's what it was.

It all started in the First Terran War when I set a trap to get the other player to destroy my Nilton Bomb Carrier in detonation range of his homeworld (Dirt, or Mud, or Earth, I think it was called, something like that....). I'll have to tell the story in a post sometime. It's been kind of going darker ever since 😁

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Hehe, Awesome.

I've been tempted lately to get back into my fiction writing again... I mean my main works. None of it has ever been exposed to Hive.

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You should definitely do that !

I'm at the point whether I'm wondering if some of the serial ones I've written could be merged together, edited, re-written and expanded out, and put out as novellas on somewhere like KDP.

One thing I find with Hive is that there's a "sweet spot" when it comes to post lengths which creates great discipline with the use of words but also means some of the more descriptive passages get edited right down.

!BBH
!LOLZ

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